My fifth week in the CXL Institute Mini Degree of Conversion Rate Optimization CRO — A Review

Navin Israni
4 min readJan 31, 2021

When I started the “Product Messaging” course of this conversion optimization mini degree, I had no idea what I would learn but I was really excited.

So much so that I didn’t take it up for the study at all through the week and struggled to decide whether I should just pull, but ultimately decided against, an all-nighter before I started writing this article :D

You see Momoko’s super-organized lesson plan right in the intro video. She goes through it very thoroughly and you get a sense of what you will learn in each step.

Lesson 1: “Teardowns”

In the first lesson, Momoko takes us through what “teardowns” are and how to apply them. She also cautions us against their most commonly-mistaken use i.e. to rewrite sales pages. In doing so, she points us back to the customer and says (and I’m paraphrasing here..) you have to talk to your customers and prospects if you want to rewrite your sales page.

She also gives us a sneak peek into her conversion techniques and philosophy that she follows.

So, in short, this lesson is all about:

  • Understanding why unstructured, opinion-based teardowns can cause confusion and discord
  • A core set of established persuasion, conversion, and CRO principles with which to assess sales page copy
  • A standardized, shareable checklist for conducting copy teardowns based on these persuasion, conversion, and CRO principles

What are “teardowns”

Teardowns are a way to dissecting the conversion elements and principles in a sales/conversion page to know what’s working and what’s not.

This means teardowns cannot tell you what will work. For that, you have to talk to your customers and prospects.

Also, teardowns can be extremely subjective based on what the copywriter or expert conducting the teardown likes or dislikes. So teardowns of the same page can bring up different insights if done by different people.

Teardown Element #1: Conversion Formula by MECLab

This is not a mathematical formula; it only shows the dependency among elements.

It tells us broadly what decides your sales page’s conversion potential. According to this formula, the conversion potential is based on important factors:

  • The motivation behind why the customer wants to buy something and when they want to buy. It’s the most important element
  • The value of what you are offering to the buyer. Even if the value is not exactly as they want/expect, chances of conversion are high if they really need that product urgently.
  • You also have to increase incentives for conversion and minimize the friction.
  • The prospect’s anxiety is an important factor that influences the chances of conversion.

Teardown Element #2: Robert Cialdini’s 7 Principles of Persuasion

If you don’t know who Robert Cialdini is, then you must be really new to marketing. His books have guided generations of persuasion marketers across the globe. He is one of the most respected marketing/copywriting legends.

His 6 persuasion principles are very common:

  • Social Proof
  • Authority
  • Scarcity/Urgency
  • Likeability
  • Reciprocity
  • Consistent Commitment

You might have heard about one or more of these terms even if you have spent a minimal amount in marketing. After you satisfy the basic conversion requirements, you are still left with a sales page that has sound conversion elements built into it but it doesn’t much to get people to buy. It merely addresses those requirements through copy text.

Compared to the CRO (Conversion Rate Optimization) tips mentioned in the above section, these persuasion principles provide tangible elements that help persuade the customer/prospect.

The seventh one is Unity (Us vs Them) which is relevant in these hyper-political modern times.

Teardown Element #3: Claude Hopkins’ Scientific Advertising (Copywriting) Principles

When actually writing down your copy, it’s important to have certain communication principles that bind the copy together.

If the CRO elements (element #1) tell you what to communicate on the sales page, these copywriting principles tell you how to communicate them.

Claude Hopkins was born in the 1860s and is widely considered the world’s first copywriter who created print-based ads and used unique ways to attribute sales to those printed ads (through coupons).

While his copywriting skills were applied before computers were ever a thing, his copywriting principles have seen enduring success and glowing endorsements from everyone in the copywriting industry.

These 4 basic principles that everyone basically learned from Claude Hopkins are:

  • Be specific
  • Talk like a salesman speaks in a real face-to-face meeting
  • Write from a service perspective, don’t try to sell
  • Tell the full story.

What elements to consider when conducting a “copy teardown”

Here, Momoko breaks down the entire funnel into different types of copy:

  • Attention-capturing Copy
  • Persuasive Copy
  • Transactional Copy
  • Post-purchase copy

At this point, Momoko presents her old sheet of questions that she used in the past for her copy teardowns.

This sheet addressed only persuasive copy (only landing pages copy — text on the page, visuals, CTA, etc)

Also, according to her, the questions were quite open-ended and so were difficult to mark with an absolute grade.

Then she shares her new teardown sheet which covers all funnel stages and marks various elements with a short range of specific numerical scores.

Then she begins demonstrating the whole procedure of teardown on the old homepage of petdoors.com

Teardown of petdoors.com

Here she first explains the meaning of each row and each column in her new teardown sheet. Her sheet is very thorough and covers some fantastic details. You can see the amount of work that she did in creating this sheet. The Questions and their options are very clearly worded.

This is followed by the actual teardown — the question-by-question analysis of the webpage (in this case the original homepage of petdoors.com). However, she doesn’t do this for the complete page. She only demonstrates it for a single conversion requirement and then she encouraged us to go out and try it on our own homepage/service page/sales page.

Finally, she ends the lesson with an example of when she used this framework to help a client.

She made minor tweaks and it shot up their count of incoming qualified leads by a whopping 39% almost overnight.

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Navin Israni

Raw reflections about love, life, marketing, and productivity from the mind of a 30-something autistic Indian adult. Share my work if you love it!